2014考研英语作文押题追星范文及答案（考研英语一作文狂热追星）

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Asissubtlyportrayedinthedrawing,thepictureontheleftillustratesayoungboywrote(改为writing或者with)afamousfootballplayer'(加s,即player’s)name,(去掉)——Beckham,(去掉)onhisface,(句子较复杂，可改为ayoungboyhastheword“Beckham”,thenameofafamousfootballplayer,writtenonhisface)andtheotherpictureontherightillustratesayoungmanwhowantstohaveahairstyleofBeckhamandspendson300RMB(改为whichneeds300RMB).Thesepicturesillustrate(加that)theworshipofstar(改为thestars，或把整体改为idol-worshipping)ispopularinthemodernsociety.Therearesomefactorscontribute(改为contributing)tothisphenomenon.Thefirstfactor(加is)thattheideologyofyoungindividualsinmodernsocietyisnotindependence(改为independent,independence是名词).Theydonotknowthat(去掉)whatisworthtohold(改为whattohold)andwhatis(去掉)theyreallywantorneed.Thesecondfactor(加is)thattheatmosphereofthemodernsocietyisnotverybenefit(改为beneficial，benefit是动词)tothedevelopmentofyoungfolks.WiththedisseminationofTVs,magazines,(去掉)andsoforth,theenvironmentofworshipofstar(改为idol-worshipping)isincreasingpopularity(改为becomingincreasinglypopular).Soitcaninfluenceyoungperson(加s)alwaysandeverywhere.Inmypointofview,thepreferenceofindividual,thereisnoonerightorwrongchoice(句式混乱，改为there’snorightorwrongregardstoindividuals’preference).Becausevariousfolkstakedifferentattitudestoward(改为towards)thephenomenonofworship,manymaybe(去掉)likewhileother(改为others)maynot.ButIdeem,ascollegestudents,weshouldputourvigouronthe(去掉)learningratherthanpursuingstar(改为stars).

总体点评

文章存在很多语法上的问题，尤其是比较细致的问题，还有标点符号运用有误，作者在完成习作后应认真检查，避免不必要的错误。此外，词汇量少，比如在第一段一直重复illustrate这个单词，平时可以多积累一些词汇，在运用的时候注意变换。句型也相对较为单一，多总结模仿经典句型，提高自己的写作水平，为自己的习作增彩。作者可以从大量熟读经典范文入手，积累知识，自己勤于练习。加油吧，祝你考研成功!

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