高考英语作文经典范文(高考英语作文集锦)

作文题目

假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。

高考英语作文经典范文(高考英语作文集锦)

注意:1.词数:100左右:

2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.)

范文一:

DearBob,

I’mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter,andI’mgladtohearthatyouwillgotoChinatolearnChinesehere.Ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.ItisonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyouthere,anditisonestopbeforetheChineseSchool.Theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms,oneofwhichisbedroom,theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.Thereareabed,asofa,adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallfiat,andtherentis500yuanpermonth.Maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwish,butI’lltrymybesttomeetyourneeds.Ifitisnotsuitableenough,writetomeandIwilllookforanotherbetterplace.

Hopeyouwillcomeheresoon!

Allthebest!

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由:本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。

范文二:

DearBob,

WelcometoChina!Youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou.

IhavefoundanapartmentonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorandthere’rethreeroomsinit:abedroom,akitchen,andabathroom.Thereisabed,asofa,adeskandachairinthebedroom.Thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth.

Alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.JusttaketheNo.11busatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast,willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive?ThenI’Ubeabletomeetyouattheairport,seeyou.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

范文三:

满分理由:本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。

?DearBob,

Howareyouthesedays?

I’msogladtoknowthatyou’llcometoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.NowI’vefoundonewhichIthinkisprettygood.TheplaceisonFangCaoStreetwhichisneartheNo.11busstop.It’sjustonestopawayfromJianxinChineseSchool.

Therearethreerooms,akitchen,abathroomandabedroom.Thoughitisnotverybig,only25squaremetres,Ithinkitissuitable.Bytheway,therentis500yuanpermonth.Ihopeyou’lllikeit.Ifnot,I’lltrytofindanotherplaceforyou.

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由:本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

范文四:

?DearBob,

I’msogladthatyouarecomingtolearnChinesehere.I’vealreadyfoundyouahousenearourschool.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutit.

YoumaygetonNo.llbusatFangCaoStreetandthenextstopisjustJianXinChineseSchool.Thehouseisneartheschool.Itisabout25squaremetres.Inthebedroom,thereisabed,asofastandingagainstthewallandatablenearthewindow.Youmayfindalightonthetableandachairnexttoit.Therearetwootherroomsconnectingthebedroom.Theleftoneisabathroomandtherightoneisakitchen.Soyoumaycookbyyourself.Therentforthehouseis500yuanpermonth.

Hopeyou’llenjoystayinghere!

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由:本文内容具体,详略得当,表述方式很有创造力和新意,长短句并用,语言结构富于变化,错落有致,顺畅圆润,尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到,为文章增色不少。

范文五:

?DearBob,

I’mgladtohearfromyou.

Welcometoourcityinseptember.I’vefoundasuitablehouseforyou.

ThehouseisonFangCaoStreet,notfarfromtheJianxinChineseSchool.IfyoutaketheNo.11bus,itisjustonestop.

Itisaflatonthethirdfloorofabuilding.Ithasthreerooms,aliving-room,abathroomandakitchen.Youcancookyourself.Themirror,thebasinandthebathtubareveryconvenientforyou.Intheliving-room,thereisabed,asofaandadeskwithchair.Thedeskisnexttothewindow.Itwillbegoodforstudy.Thetotalsizeis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanamonth.

Willyoubesatisfiedwiththisflat,oryouwantanotherone?Justletmeknow.I’lltrymybesttohelpyou.

Yours,

LiHua

?满分理由:本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如“suitablehouse”、“notfarfrom’’等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。

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