高考英语作文得分点分析（高考英语作文如何给分）

如何写出英语作文得分的“亮点”

以下几种手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的“亮点”。

1.改变句子的开头方式,不是一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词作状语等。试比较:

(原文)MybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycletheotherday.

(修正)TheotherdaymybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycle.

(原文)Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.

(修正)Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.

2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。例如:

(1)强调句

(原文)Thedoghassavedmylittlesisterbravely.

(修正)Itisthedogthathassavedmylittlesisterbravely.

(2)主从复合句

(原文)Wehadtostandtheretocatchtheoffender.

(修正)Whatwehadtodowastostandthere,tryingtocatchtheoffender.

(3)分词短语、由with或without引导的短语

(原文)Thedriverescapedanddidn’tstop,helefttheoldmanlyingontheroad.

(修正)Thedriverescapedwithoutstopping,leavingtheoldmanlyingontheroad.

(4)倒装句

(原文)Iwenttobedat11:30.

(修正)Notuntil11:30didIgotobed.

(5)省略句

(原文)Whileyouarecrossingthestreet,youshouldbecareful.

(修正)Whilecrossingthestreet,youshouldbecareful.

3.通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。例如:

(原文)Hestoppedusanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.

(修正)Hestoppedushalfanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.

(原文)Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.

(修正)Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing.

4.注意连接词与句子的运用。

以年

高考作文为例,在信的开头,可加上“YouwanttoknowsomethingaboutwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina?”这句话起承上启下的作用,使文章过渡自然;再如,用“Whatwasworse?”引出减负前,晚上还要做作业,就寝时间11:30等要点。又如,“NowIhavemorefreetime...”可引出减负后的情况。另外,在信的结尾,可用“Howaboutyou?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.”来自然地结束这封信。

5.使用过渡词语。

写好了每个句子,并不一定就是一篇

好文章,因为作为一篇文章,还必须行文连贯。那么,如何使文章行文连贯呢?这就要求我们在组成篇章时,要用好过渡性词语,过渡性词语就像是我们组装机械时使用的润滑剂一样,起着润滑的作用。常用的过渡词语主要有:

并列递进:and,also,aswellas,besides,what’smore,furthermore,moreover,etc.

转折:but,yet,however,although,nevertheless,inspiteof,afterall,etc.

因果:because,as,for,since,forthisreason,becauseof,so,therefore,thus,asaresult,etc.

对比:or,otherwise,like,unlike,onthecontrary,while,ontheotherhand,insteadof,etc.

总结:inall,inbrief,onthewhole,inshort,ingeneral,inoneword,etc.

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高考英语作文模板：议论文的框架

(1)?不同观点列举型（?选择型?）

There?is?a?widespread?concern?over?the?issue?that?__作文题目_____.?But?it?is?well?known?that?the?opinion

?concerning?this?hot?topic?varies?from?person?to?person.?A?majority?of?people?think?that?_?观点一________.?In?

their?views?there?are?2?factors?contributing?to?this?attitude?as?follows:?in?the?first?place,?___原因一_______.Furthermore,?in?the?second?place,?___原因二_____.?So?it?goes?without?saying?that?___观点一_____.?

People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold?the?idea?that?___观点二_______.?In?their?point?of?view,?on?the?one?hand，?___原因一_______.??On?the?other?hand,?____原因二_____.?Therefore,?thereis?nodoubtthat?___观点二______.?

As?far?as?I?am?concerned,?Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat?__观点一或二______.Itis?not?only?because?________,?but?also?because?_________.?The?more?_______,?the?more?________.?

?（2）利弊型的议论文

Nowadays,?there?is?a?widespread?concern?over?(the?issue?that)___作文题目______.?In?fact,?there?are?both?

advantages?and?disadvantages?in?__题目议题_____.?Generally?speaking,?it?is?widely?believed?there?are?

several?positive?aspects?as?follows.?Firstly,?___优点一______.??And?secondly?___优点二_____.?

Just?As?a?popular?saying?goes,?"every?coin?has?two?sides",?__讨论议题______?is?no?exception,?and?in?another?

word,?it?still?has?negative?aspects.?To?begin?with,?___缺点一______.?In?addition,??____缺点二______.?

To?sum?up,?we?should?try?to?bring?the?advantages?of?__讨论议题____?into?full?play,?and?reduce

?the?disadvantagesto?the?minimum?at?the?same?time.?In?that?case,?we?will?definitely?make?a?better?use?of?the?____讨论议题___.

(?3?)?答题性议论文

???Currently,?there?is?a?widespread?concern?over?(the?issue?that)__作文题目_______?.It?is?really?an?important?

concern?to?every?one?of?us.?As?a?result,?we?must?spare?no?efforts?to?take?some?measures?to?solve?this?problem.

???As?we?know?that?there?are?many?steps?which?can?be?taken?to?undo?this?problem.?First?of?all,?__途径一______.?In?addition,?another?way?contributing?to?success?of?the?solving?problem?is?___途径二_____.

???Above?all,?to?solve?the?problem?of?___作文题目______,?we?should?find?a?number?of?various

?ways.?But?as?far?as?I?am?concerned,?I?would?prefer?to?solve?the?problem?in?this?way,?that?is?to?say,?____方法_____.

(?4?)?谚语警句性议论文

????It?is?well?know?to?us?that?the?proverb:?"?___谚语_______"?has?a?profound?significance?and?value?not?only?in

?our?job?but?also?in?our?study.?It?means?____谚语的含义_______.?The?saying?canbe?illustrated?througha?series?

of?examples?as?follows.?(?also?theoretically?)

????A?case?in?point?is?___例子一______.?Therefore,?it?is?goes?without?saying?that?it?is?of?great?of?importance

?to?practice?the?proverb?____谚语_____.

????With?the?rapid?development?of?science?and?technology?in?China,?an?increasing?number?of?people?come?to?realize?that?it?is?also?of?practical?use?to?stick?to?the?saying:?____谚语_____.?Themore?we?are?aware?of?thesignificance?

of?this?famous?saying,?the?more?benefits?we?will?get?in?our?daily?study?and?job..

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